poem

[mrgizzmoe]

Dear katrina 11/27/08 930pm

you make me smile

each and every day

enjoy watching you grow and learn

in your times of play

got to try to make every second last

the years can go by so fast

you are my one true success

I love you and your mother to death

I know i am not the best person

but here are my words of wisdom

try to be a better person each day

easy to say but take it day by day

try to look on the bright side

things could always be worse

no matter how bad it is, rememeber this.

dont give up

failur is not a bad thing

not trying is

you get back what you put in

that is the most important to understand

dont let your self be used

you can stand on your own feet

I can see that now

and your not even three

we dont know what going to happen next

dont take nothing for granted

it could all be gone in a flash

 

[Voodoo]

Those are some great words of wisdom, so very true. I really like it.

 

[Keri]

Good poem. Do need work on a couple spelling and grammer errors. All your don'ts need ' and failur is failure. Also instead of saying dont take nothing for granted, say don't take anything for granted. Sounds better to me. But I love the message!!!