I guess I like to see more capitals and punctuation marks.
On your home page you use "in" where I think you meant "is". (Lil Stars is)
Sometimes if sentences "run together"people may just not try to figure out exactly what you are telling us.
It will be a very nice website with some capital letters at the start of sentences and more organized messages.
I am not an expert but just have some things that will be a "turn off" for me when I am looking at a site.
My site is also my own design and I need to get better photos up and a more professional look.
Can't wait for spring to take some better pictures, or maybe even get a professional photographer to do the job.
I am just making some comments because you asked, and I am not trying to be critical, only give you an honest bit of feedback from my view.